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Black and Silver by ~imkikyo:iconimkikyo:



He absolutely could not keep still.

His hands were shaking, his legs were shaking, his eyes were shaking. Every part of him ached to get up from his makeshift chair and perform the operation himself. No, he thought, I have to trust Doc with this.

But the more he told himself to trust Doc, the less he actually did, and the more he wanted to knock his hands away from the body on the table.

This wait was going to kill him.

At what felt like a hundred miles away, Doc stood with his fingers poking around in the neck of a body Ian had become accustomed to keeping constant contact with. It was so unsettling, to see her lying on the table as if dead, when that’s what he’d been trying to prevent for so long.

Ian sighed, tried and failed to relax, and put his head in his hands. A second later he picked it back up when it detected a muttered curse from Doc.

He had to fight every instinct in his body that told him to run straight to the table. Doc knew what he was doing. There was nothing to be afraid of.

A flash of silver caught Ian’s eye. It was on Doc’s fingers, on his shirt, on his face.

Instantly, he was on his feet and beside the table, all his careful self-control of earlier forgotten.

“What the hell did you do?!”
Doc mumbled in response, a shameful admission that he’d forgotten where to touch the soul and accidentally pulled too hard. A few of Wanda’s tiny limbs had been pulled off and were lazily dripping silvery blood.
“Well, don’t just stand there like an idiot!” Ian roared. “Get her out of there!”
“Ian, be rational. If I try to force her out, Melanie could get hurt.”
“I don’t give a damn about what happens to Melanie! Just get her out!” Somewhere in Ian’s peripheral vision, Jared leapt to his feet and adopted an expression almost identical to his, but he didn’t care.

The tension in the air was causing Wanda to shake, but no one seemed to notice until a horrible slicing sound echoed through the whole room.

Ian didn’t need to look. He knew. So did Doc. So did Jared.

He turned toward the huge human-shaped blur that was heading straight for him and put his arms up defensively.

The last thing he remembered was a crazed scream of “You got what you wanted!” before he was struck on the side of the head, and he saw nothing but black.

Nothing but black and silver.
©2008-2009 ~imkikyo
:iconimkikyo:

Author's Comments

THE HOST FANFICTION LOL.
First fanfiction I write in months, and it's gotta be The Host. Lololololololol.
Anyway.
No, this is not my epic project. I've actually been stuck in that area for a couple weeks. XD
This is an entry for ~TheHostClub's bloopers contest. I think it might be a little more serious than what was anticipated, but it's such a serious book, comedy just didn't feel right.

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:iconwhite-rain-angel:
Oh my gosh! If that actually had happened in the book I probably would have cried. Nicely done ^-^

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You know you've read a good book when you turn the last page and feel a little as if you have lost a friend. ~Sweeney
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No man can be called friendless who has God and the companionship of good books. ~Elizabeth Browning
:iconimkikyo:
I cried throughout the whole book anyway, hahahah.
Thanks. <3

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Waheblahhableh! Waheblahhableh!! You always say that!! Misuta Barumu-- iie, Barumunku-san.

You... are an acrobat.
... and he told me a story I will never forget.
:iconwhite-rain-angel:
:D I cried like five times when I was reading the book

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You know you've read a good book when you turn the last page and feel a little as if you have lost a friend. ~Sweeney
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No man can be called friendless who has God and the companionship of good books. ~Elizabeth Browning
:iconmaximiliancullen:
gosh I didn't understand the ending! can someone please explain?!
:iconimkikyo:
Jared punched Ian in the face. Really, really hard. Maybe it was more like a knife-punch.

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Waheblahhableh! Waheblahhableh!! You always say that!! Misuta Barumu-- iie, Barumunku-san.

You... are an acrobat.
... and he told me a story I will never forget.
:iconmaximiliancullen:
oh! well, anyways it was amazing!!!!!!!
:iconimkikyo:
:] thank you.

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Waheblahhableh! Waheblahhableh!! You always say that!! Misuta Barumu-- iie, Barumunku-san.

You... are an acrobat.
... and he told me a story I will never forget.
:iconjustins-girl:
I would have cried if this was in the book! D: but you did a good job!!

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*If everyone in the world was like Emmett Cullen, no one would be depressed. XD
*"I'll take that as an invitation," Damon Salvatore :heart:

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